Lover(s).

The clouds walk with me!
I stretch my hands and starts descend to let me touch them.
and when i jump and shriek, The moon giggles!

The rain droplets come and caress my cheek
winds blow to play with my hair!
and I lose myself in the looking and loving.

Oh dear,
You may come some other time!
I’m not alone!
I have moon, stars, clouds, rain and winds with me
My ultimate lovers for tonight πŸ™‚

 

 

My first take for this kind of poem.
Please tell me how it was?

14 thoughts on “Lover(s).

  1. Please!!!
    Dont tell me its your first one!!!
    It was so beautiful..honestly Di..
    Just loved the flow and particularly these lines..
    “You may come some other time!
    I’m not alone!
    I have moon, stars, clouds, rain and winds with me
    My ultimate lovers for tonight :)”

    Felt like am reading lines by Amy Lee

    Dying to read more of this stuff from you..

  2. *jaw drops down to floor, refixing it*

    you saying make it worthy missy πŸ™‚
    Ty πŸ™‚

    any ripper to rip it off?

  3. lol..ur sweetheart wont be happy tht uve left him for the moon and stars πŸ˜›

    but yea once in a while nature makes us fel spl

    lovely πŸ™‚

  4. Very, very, very well done. You’re shooing away the guy for the moon and the stars, now i wouldnt go that far. I’d settle for ignoring him while i was eating icecream. πŸ˜€

  5. lucky moon…lucky stars..lucky clouds…lucky rains..lucky winds…eh eh:D
    but yeah, well written…amazing how much peace u can get in d company of nature…plus they r d best listeners in dis wide world!!!

  6. The Poem is Good!! Yes really but your Dear would be unhappy reading this!! πŸ˜€ hehehee

    So Please Dedicate this Poem to your Dear!! Otherwise you will not write more in the Future!!

  7. The rain droplets come and caress my cheek winds blow to play with my hair!and I lose myself in looking an loving

    good use or words…its honestly good and seems this ur first poem or am seeing ur poem for the first time….coz its really good

    ahm ahm

  8. Yet another day
    another long wait
    The horizon a hazy promise
    That you’ll come today

    The dew wakes me up
    With a gentle tender kiss
    The sun hugs me tight
    Like I was meant to be his

    The wind ruffles my hair
    Trying to make me look pretty
    The raindrops make me hear
    What my reflection wants to speak

    All dressed up and yearning
    I lay on the grass to wait
    Hoping against hope
    That you will come today

    In the crimson sky
    As the sun reluctantly leaves
    I shy away from the stars
    And the moon mocks at me…

  9. Weird, You’re sane!

    Ferrin, Thankyou πŸ™‚

    CN, Yes, Lucky them.

    Aamir, I will still be writing *wonders*

    Krazy, wow! lovely.. we all find escape in the universal phenomenons.
    how we all make them the vindications, the logics, the reasons.

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