The clouds walk with me!
I stretch my hands and starts descend to let me touch them.
and when i jump and shriek, The moon giggles!
The rain droplets come and caress my cheek
winds blow to play with my hair!
and I lose myself in the looking and loving.
Oh dear,
You may come some other time!
I’m not alone!
I have moon, stars, clouds, rain and winds with me
My ultimate lovers for tonight 🙂
My first take for this kind of poem.
Please tell me how it was?
AMuslimMama 
Please!!!
Dont tell me its your first one!!!
It was so beautiful..honestly Di..
Just loved the flow and particularly these lines..
“You may come some other time!
I’m not alone!
I have moon, stars, clouds, rain and winds with me
My ultimate lovers for tonight :)”
Felt like am reading lines by Amy Lee
Dying to read more of this stuff from you..
*jaw drops down to floor, refixing it*
you saying make it worthy missy 🙂
Ty 🙂
any ripper to rip it off?
if girls were to fall back on moons, stars, sky etc; what will happen to us yaar!! he he…good one..
lol..ur sweetheart wont be happy tht uve left him for the moon and stars 😛
but yea once in a while nature makes us fel spl
lovely 🙂
Oh chriss, Thankyou.
Sandeep, Lol.
Very, very, very well done. You’re shooing away the guy for the moon and the stars, now i wouldnt go that far. I’d settle for ignoring him while i was eating icecream. 😀
whoa! i think that was brilliant.
applause.
lucky moon…lucky stars..lucky clouds…lucky rains..lucky winds…eh eh:D
but yeah, well written…amazing how much peace u can get in d company of nature…plus they r d best listeners in dis wide world!!!
The Poem is Good!! Yes really but your Dear would be unhappy reading this!! 😀 hehehee
So Please Dedicate this Poem to your Dear!! Otherwise you will not write more in the Future!!
The rain droplets come and caress my cheek winds blow to play with my hair!and I lose myself in looking an loving
good use or words…its honestly good and seems this ur first poem or am seeing ur poem for the first time….coz its really good
ahm ahm
Yet another day
another long wait
The horizon a hazy promise
That you’ll come today
The dew wakes me up
With a gentle tender kiss
The sun hugs me tight
Like I was meant to be his
The wind ruffles my hair
Trying to make me look pretty
The raindrops make me hear
What my reflection wants to speak
All dressed up and yearning
I lay on the grass to wait
Hoping against hope
That you will come today
In the crimson sky
As the sun reluctantly leaves
I shy away from the stars
And the moon mocks at me…
Weird, You’re sane!
Ferrin, Thankyou 🙂
CN, Yes, Lucky them.
Aamir, I will still be writing *wonders*
Krazy, wow! lovely.. we all find escape in the universal phenomenons.
how we all make them the vindications, the logics, the reasons.
you are a brilliant story teller.Period.
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