The Legend of Saif-ul-Muluk Lake.

The jeep slowly stumbled on the narrow ascending paths, the apparently bottomless chasm was right next to the road, a little mistake and you could be buried in the void forever. I shuddered at the thought, of the void, of being buried, of for ever.

The snow crested peaks were visible through the window panes and I feasted my eyes with this heavenly sight. Maria was almost snoring on the next seat, a slumber induced by the anti-allergic she’d taken before the ride to counter her fear of height, she hated missing delights of the journey. But things never always happen the way we want them to, and it was better to get used to of it. The college had ended and we were allowed to have a one week vacation at Rehman Uncle’s, Daddy’s childhood friend, place in Naran (a hill station in Pakistan).

July in Naran is refreshing, vivid and exceptional, the blue birds hover over the dwellers and squirrels squash the walnuts mourning the fact that spring has come to them when summers should and the fact that summers will never come at all, the sun will never shine bright, but yellow butterflies kiss the red flowers and daintily steal their nectar, leaving them nodding in intoxication! And pine cones litter the steep hills.

The jeep crossed the brinks of city with people who breathed, smiled and cried at the same time, who, in the wrinkles of their faces held deep lachrymal grief. Their cloudy eyes told strange lore of yore and they wore sad grimace, I wondered how they were able to hold secrets, of long forgotten past and of uncertain future with which a lot of hopes and dreams were associated, of which very little would be realized, this is the sad part of dreams, only few come true, and the sadder part is that you never know which will be the lucky ones.

So as the fleeting scenes whispered to me I thought all the random thoughts, impossible and not-so-possible thoughts of the past, the present and the future that these valleys had and will witness.

The same feeling would cross us again the next day, on an excursion trip of the Valley, walking along the narrow pathways on the steep hills where yellows flaunted in green, we would feel the air heavy with eeriness, drenched by love, which stayed like fog, we could smell it, we could feel it, we could taste it but we couldn’t see it, however, like fog, it blurred everything else. Love stayed there and settled on the stone as growing velvet moss, on petals as droplets, and beneath the sea in an oyster, the making of a pearl.

And nature, then, decided to reveal onto us the deep dark secret which was caged, cursed and forgotten, in immaculate shadows of time. It kept lurking inside the bellies of streets and buildings like unborn babies in their mothers, like words in the tips of pen and the liquid medicine in the syringe.

Back then, we didn’t even have the slightest idea that we were about to find out the most chilling of the stories that these hills had ever seen. A love story. Of a girl who dreamed of a prince who’d sweep her off the floor on his white steed. And a Boy who bore magic in his eyes, the eyes in which, one day, she would lose herself. The rest is history.

It is of little significance that how we found the story teller in the street of a local market and how we persuaded her to narrate to us what happened to Raimeen, who would meet Ayaan, in her father’s library, on a chilly winter’s night when every one else had been marinating in their blankets, when the temperature outside the heater-warmed doors-and-windows-closed room, was less than -2, and every normal person would have thought of sleeping, the night when the maid was burning with fever and in order to fetch the next part of the book she had been reading, Raimeen would have to go to the library herself and she did, She, the crazy -bushy-haired, a pimple-scared nose, orange sweaterd, and light green dress clad – which bore orange beads onto it, like lambs bore that slaughtering fate, came out of the room and walked to the library, life was easy then. Love was inevitable.

Ayaan, a member of the family of Behzad’s friend, was invited to quench his thirst of knowledge from Behzad’s collection of books. He had deep blue eyes that sparkle with pain in them, dreams in them and ebb and flow of love; in which, she, with all her might and her virgin heart, drowned without trace.

Behzad Tirmizi was an Oxford scholar, very enlightened when it came to English literature, his only love, and very conservative when it came to his family. His girl-children were allowed to study as much as they want, and they could benefit from his large collection of books but were not allowed to go out the Tirmizi palace, an old teacher, well versed in all what the children were required to learn, would come daily to teach them. The only exception to the rule was going for a walk to Saif-ul-Muluk lake, which was hardly 5 min away. He didn’t know that the only exception would bring havoc to the family.

Raimeen was youngest of her 5 siblings, three boys and two girls. The youngest, the most mature, the most silent and the most astonishing. Many years later when I would hear the story I would wonder if she was the most daring and most rebellious too? Having taken the steps which would be considered blasphemy? I think yes, she was superlative of all the good adjectives and superlative of what was good according to her.

She had strange aura about her chiseled face of bitter sadness, of bitter-sweet loneliness, of hopes that she knew would be futile, she still lingered on, waiting for miracles to happen praying that they might happen soon.

Back then, no body knew that she had dimpled smile only because no one had ever seen her smiling, her mother must had a memory of it, of her early childhood when smiles were as normal as breathing, but now it had been so many years of her mother’s death that hardly anyone had a clear memory of it. So as Raimeen crossed the threshold of girl-hood she stopped smiling and speaking altogether. But she had deep-dimpled smile and light brown eyes, which anyone could mistake with honey, but no one noticed, no one paid attention to such minute details about her. May be it was because of other people’s oblivion that when she embraced drastic changes about her and when she started signing and smiling no one noticed.

Her room was the last in the alley, the last and the smallest, it was justified because she was the smallest too, it had large windows from which the world could be seen, her world, of thick bunches of flowers, of far away mountains, birds, bees and butterflies. She would sit by it to listen to all the sounds, of animals and of water rushing by, yearning to meet the sea. She would sit there and read books after books, wondering how the places, which were described in them, would be like?

And the sheer delight of reading would cultivate in her the desire to weave words herself, just to see if they were equally beautiful or not, and she had taught herself to paint the things she so love just to see if they were captivating enough or not, they always turned out to be masterpieces.

Many weeks later, when the spring had painted the ambiance with all the divine colors that the benevolent umber had sprinkled and when Behzad was out of town, she would sneak out clandestinely to the banks of Lake Saif-ul-Muluk, where, as the legends says, Prince Saif-ul-Muluk, on one moon-lit night, had witnessed the mystic descend of fairies and where He had lost his heart to the most beautiful of them, and where many years later Raimeen would sit, to recite her poem to Ayaan, because he was the only one who’d listen to her and as she believed, would understand her.

Love stretched beneath her skin, she detached herself from the real world and started living in the place beyond anyone’s grasp, breathing in the shades of dreams, yearning for impossible, of being with him, of loving him by looking at him. Impossible.

And when love enslaved her and she lost her heart to a random someone who had deep blue eyes and coarse voice, she wore flowers in her hair, bangles in her wrist, put henna on her palm, and kohl in her honey-colored eyes, and the mirror of her room would bear a lot of lip-shaped lip-stick marks on it, light pink and glimmering red, may be the love for him had also developed in her the love of herself. And very intense.

For many months that would follow; she had kept meeting him, beneath the sky full of stars and yearned to count all of them with him by her side. She continued listening his travelogues, of far away places with strange sounding names, of which she would dream flying over with him, and hidden in the vine creepers where little pink flowers would loom to acknowledge love and where butterflies would spread their wings to take them to a forbidden penumbral shadows of light, of dreams, of ever-after and beyond, she would sing for him Tennyson and Browning.

Listening to that we wondered if we were allowed to be a part of it, A part of her exquisitely protected secret? Were we trespassing the area which was not allowed to see/feel/taste/touch? The clouds descended on the hills which had steep slops, narrow alley and horses whining, which had seen her running aimlessly following the butterflies with him, which would see many other heart-wrenching scenes too. No body knew anything then, but it would come soon, Sooner.

No one was sure about how the news spread, but it did and one fine day the gray sun rose to sink in murk, pristine flowers sprouted to be frozen to death, the crust of ecstasy annihilated, curse doomed upon the fate and right when she had dipped her feet in the crystal clear waters of Saif-Ul-Muluk lake, where, as the legends says, after having lost her maiden to the skies, Prince Saif-ul-Muluk had sat and cried for decades that followed, and his tears would transformed the place into a lake, she sat to devoured the feeling of being with him, and while she was counting the ripples and giggling, they had heard the whining of horses, of a distant gun roar and saw Behzad Tirmizi, riding the beast with fierce eyes, which bore hatred and malice. They trembled at the shades of brutality so vividly painted on his face, the face that she knew from her birth, the face that all of a sudden would bear the creases, cruel creases spreading like the net, like the spider’s web, all over it

Their second-last memory was of hostile Him, the shouting, screaming and yelling him. Of a hand caked with mud and blood that wanted to get bloodier, thirsty of hers, his, their story! The bare bloodiness lingered and she was shocked, so shocked to tear-shedding, pleading and beseeching.

There was a wilder man, psychotically wild and obnoxious on the horse.

A fragile her shivering more of shock and dismay than of fear…

And a protecting Him. Fearless, with deep blue eyes, in which she had drown without trace.

Their last memory was of some inaudible curses thrown in their direction and the bullet that followed and pierced his chest, her last memory was seeing him fallen down, of a bitter tear drop lingering at her jaw-line and before anyone could do anything her grieved heart shattered in myriads of shreds, she looked at the skies and fell the same spot, dead! The teardrop wailed and fell down.

No ritual was performed; and no funeral was conducted. A grave was dug with sheer loathe and the bodies were dumped into it as trash.

That would be their together forever and beyond.

But that’s not the end of it; precise two days after it, when the air was thick with melancholy Tirmizi Palace shrieked and crumbled into debris. All the dwellers died buried in the life-less bricks. Nature has its own ways of revenge.

And even now, many years after that, when ever the moon rises and dances on water, distant sounds of giggles, of bangles and rhythm of flute are being heard.

The place where her tear had fallen, now flow the most beautiful spring of sweetest water in the valley.

Love thrives on.

(Thankyou for the patience of reading it. I’m not very good at writing stories like that, your critic will be valuable for me. Help me improve.

ps. Rohan, Thankyou for proof-reading it)

20 thoughts on “The Legend of Saif-ul-Muluk Lake.

  1. I ❤ this.. Your style reminds me a lot of Jane Austen… It looked liked it was going to be a long read. Not only was it nice but it seemed to flow perfectly. It was surprisingly fast-paced and a pleasure to read. It was nice.. Really nice!! 😀

  2. Yeah did take some eye drops to read..!!but at the end of it i ll say was DARN worth it..!!

    Kudos to the story..and hip hip hurray to the eye drops they work.

    And about proof reading..!!lets sign a pact..we write..we proof read each others rant..!!

  3. Yeah Rash, your right. For me it reminded The Anne of Green Gables.

    very detailed,well-researched and written and really goodfor that matter, looked like a pro at it.

    initial start i guess was bit slow
    wit u trying to create a sense of de surroundings,ultimately, a superb attempt 🙂 writing such long stories of immense grief,romance and emotions are damn difficult.

    As i said, looked so much as a classic 🙂 way to go 🙂

  4. WoW Asbah,
    I luvd da way you described everything in so much detail. The avid use of adjectives and the framing of long sentences was just so perfect. It gave an intense emtotional feel to the story.
    The representation of the beauty of nature at Naran, the description of Raimeen, aahhhhh…so beautiful……!
    Except for a few grammatical errors which i am sure r typos coz of the length of the story it was perfect! Nd believe me dey happen wen u type out sumthng wid ur heart nd it takes da form of a story a misd keystroke here and ders bound to take place. So no worries!!!
    Nw lemme tak a guess! Raimeen…..shades of u in her if m nt wrong……da way she dreams about fantasies…abt love…abt going to places and fantasizing about dat…..about paitning and sketching her heart out about things she luvd….about dressing up in a beautiful way…..dats just so u……isn’t it?
    I might be wrong, bt dats wat I felt!
    Nd its nt a v.long story, i m game to read more frm u, nytime! was sheer pleasure dis one!

    PS: Oops…I wrote a small story myself! 😛

  5. ur not at all good … your are brilliant girl .. a simple story which we must have heard a hell lot times .. you told it such that i read it twice !! just to enliven the images you put forth … *wow*

  6. it moved me. it made me cry. it was a tragic ending. i did not want Tirmizi palace to be destroyed. i wanted the occupants to realise their sin and burn in their guilt.

    they died. they died. and they met in the grave- free from shackles and worldy taunts and hypocricy. and the spring came knowing and feeling the love in the earth’s womb.

    fantastic Asbah. you need a bit of work on your diction , but that will surely come with time. i do not doubt that.

    Prayers and a pat on the back.

  7. lemme assure u tht u r highly modest…I mean, tht was bloody brilliant.
    the detailing of the landscape to the well etched nuances of Raimeen’s feelings and considerations…just wow.
    tragic but thts life.
    beautiful and thts life too.

  8. edited a bit here and there and i hope it is better now,

    Thankyou all for reading it.

    Mav, you helped me a lot improve and yeah maybe i was so emotionally obsessed with it while writing it that i overlooked mistakes. Rohan should be blamed 😛

    prats, is it so? yaay 🙂

    Sum baji, glad you liked it, and i hope i will improve!

    CN, wow 🙂 ty ty!

    insanely positive 🙂 ty!

  9. loved this one.. from the first line till the last line.. it is a ‘hats off to you’ story.. 🙂 i smiled and i cried with the characters.. you heart and soul comes across through this one.. 🙂 bring more stories.. pljjj

  10. Ouuh God !! Girl, where doth do you come from ?

    What a masterpiece…. Flawless,a s far my senses go….. I am amidst my exams, and when I saw its a little long read, I thought I’d skip it, and now, I feel like day and night reading your blog….. Heavens, its so much a beauty!!

    Sach mein, Subhaan-Allah!

    Do keep flooding your blog which such more posts, I just LOVED it…. and somehow I felt Raimeen’s chararter resembling your’s….. you too write and paint afterall….

    But a stupendous work!!

    Insha-Allah you write more, and we read even more. Am tagging you !!



  11. Ilashree, oh, you almost made me breathless 🙂

    Thankyou so much, am i so predictable? or you have some magical powers? how did you guess about the painting bit?


  12. I dont have much to say.. after reading the story and the comments complimenting it..

    I would say, “You know how to feel like your characters”.

  13. great writing…
    u know i have been to saif-ul-maluk twice.
    naran kaghan too…the lake itself depict a story…i felt it being there:)

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